3. In this video, I tried to make the first half a condensed version of what my first pitch was. In the second half, I used the feedback and talked more about the specifics of the product that I would be offering. The only thing that I feel had some value that I had to cut out in doing this was the personal experience piece of the pitch; however, this is not something that is only able to be shared in the elevator pitch, I feel that I would be able to work it into the discussion with certain potential customers in the future.
Saturday, October 27, 2018
Assignment 17A
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2. I received a good deal of feedback from the initial post. Some of the things that I found beneficial were the ones that were pointing me towards more of the marketing side of my product rather than the side of talking about nothing but the problem. I also appreciated that some of the people enjoyed my idea of throwing my own experiences in. There was not really any feedback that I did not think was beneficial or warranted.
3. In this video, I tried to make the first half a condensed version of what my first pitch was. In the second half, I used the feedback and talked more about the specifics of the product that I would be offering. The only thing that I feel had some value that I had to cut out in doing this was the personal experience piece of the pitch; however, this is not something that is only able to be shared in the elevator pitch, I feel that I would be able to work it into the discussion with certain potential customers in the future.
3. In this video, I tried to make the first half a condensed version of what my first pitch was. In the second half, I used the feedback and talked more about the specifics of the product that I would be offering. The only thing that I feel had some value that I had to cut out in doing this was the personal experience piece of the pitch; however, this is not something that is only able to be shared in the elevator pitch, I feel that I would be able to work it into the discussion with certain potential customers in the future.
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Hi Taeler,
ReplyDeleteYou did great with how you organized this elevator pitch. You seemed to have more control over explaining the different aspects of your idea and seemed very knowledgeable in doing so. I also appreciate how you acknowledged that there were aspects of the pitch that you would be able to use when pitching to your ideal customer. Overall great pitch.
Hey Taeler,
ReplyDeleteStarting your elevator pitch with a scenario where customers can picture themselves in was a great start!! You organized the pitch in a great way that offered a straight forward solution to the problem you are showing customers they have. You gave your positive opinion about the product without being pushy or wanting to force anyone to buy your product.