3. I changed essentially nothing between the second and third pitch. There was nothing that my group outlined as things that they thought that I should change, so I tried to take their advice and leave it mostly the same between submissions. I did, however, try to polish my delivery a bit more. While this was not something that was given to me in the feedback, as I watched the video before beginning this one, I noticed that I paused a bit more than I would like. I still did have some points in this video that could have been better, but I feel that the delivery was much smoother this time around.
Friday, November 9, 2018
Assignment 22A
3. I changed essentially nothing between the second and third pitch. There was nothing that my group outlined as things that they thought that I should change, so I tried to take their advice and leave it mostly the same between submissions. I did, however, try to polish my delivery a bit more. While this was not something that was given to me in the feedback, as I watched the video before beginning this one, I noticed that I paused a bit more than I would like. I still did have some points in this video that could have been better, but I feel that the delivery was much smoother this time around.
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Hi Taeler,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitches continue to get better and better. I like how comfortable you are speaking about your idea, as well as knowledgeable about the topic. The use of your hands conveys your enthusiasm about the topic and you wanting to make your ideas a reality. I think you have made a lot of improvements since the first elevator pitch and that this would resonate very well with the people you would pitch the idea to.
Taeler,
ReplyDeleteYou continue to impress me with your elevator pitches. Each one you look more and more comfortable. I love how you express your emotion in the use of your hands. You are very enthusiastic in the way you promote your product, if I heard this elevator pitch I would really consider purchasing and looking more into your product
Taeler,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch continues to be positive and straight to the point. I really like how you begin your pitch with a scenario where people can picture themselves in. Standing tall and using your hands projects your confidence in the idea you are explaining to your audience. You spoke at a great pace where I could easily understand the points you made and overall you did a great job, keep it up!